Amanda, The upper-left pose on the first page and the second page are the strongest here. They have decent gesture and energy, yet have enough detail and expression to have individuality. However, you're being too careful with your line placement. Work loosely - draw through forms. Put more effort into your work, as well.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThe upper-left pose on the first page and the second page are the strongest here. They have decent gesture and energy, yet have enough detail and expression to have individuality. However, you're being too careful with your line placement. Work loosely - draw through forms. Put more effort into your work, as well.