Amanda, These drawings are really strong - they all have good qualities. A few points: -The weight shifts in all of them are solid. Please continue to consider weight shift in your poses. Exaggerate it, if you can(dr. 3 is a good example) -Draw more dynamic poses. These are all static poses, for the most part. Look to figures walking, gesturing, running, etc. Take this nice line approach to them. - Try not to tuck drawings in the corner. Be more conscious about the whole composition in a drawing. Block it out - even with hash marks - then get to drawing. Good work.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThese drawings are really strong - they all have good qualities.
A few points:
-The weight shifts in all of them are solid. Please continue to consider weight shift in your poses. Exaggerate it, if you can(dr. 3 is a good example)
-Draw more dynamic poses. These are all static poses, for the most part. Look to figures walking, gesturing, running, etc. Take this nice line approach to them.
- Try not to tuck drawings in the corner. Be more conscious about the whole composition in a drawing. Block it out - even with hash marks - then get to drawing.
Good work.
Your style is really awesome, I like the way you show movement.
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