Amanda, The 2nd, 4th, and 6th pages are the strongest, I think. The drawing on the 6th page of the person tying up the item on the counter is wonderful. Please work towards this level of development. Try to mix up your variety in the size and focus of the drawing, and develop the eyes and faces a bit more. Also, work more with the surroundings and the full figure. Great job.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd, 4th, and 6th pages are the strongest, I think. The drawing on the 6th page of the person tying up the item on the counter is wonderful. Please work towards this level of development.
Try to mix up your variety in the size and focus of the drawing, and develop the eyes and faces a bit more. Also, work more with the surroundings and the full figure.
Great job.