Amanda, The second page is your strongest - the weight shift is good and you're capturing proportion well. You kind of gave up on all these drawings, though. Where are the hands and feet ? Capturing the figure in motion is not easy, so don't get too down when it doesn't always looks wonderful. Pull from your knowledge of proportion and combine those senses with observing the gesture. Try to arrange your drawings in Photoshop after you scan them... and make sure the lines come across as solid in the scan. You worked lightly here and may need to be darkened.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThe second page is your strongest - the weight shift is good and you're capturing proportion well. You kind of gave up on all these drawings, though. Where are the hands and feet ?
Capturing the figure in motion is not easy, so don't get too down when it doesn't always looks wonderful.
Pull from your knowledge of proportion and combine those senses with observing the gesture.
Try to arrange your drawings in Photoshop after you scan them... and make sure the lines come across as solid in the scan. You worked lightly here and may need to be darkened.