Amanda, There is a good sense of proportion and foreshortening - thus depth - in these drawings. They also feel a bit incomplete. Stick with the drawing past the beginnings and take it a step further. Try to make your lines a little more fluid, as well. You're going back and forth in a scribbly manner and you don't need to. Lastly, be more conscious of composing your drawing. Some of these get pushed to the margains and feel like you just stopped working on it once you developed it to the border. Good work.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThere is a good sense of proportion and foreshortening - thus depth - in these drawings. They also feel a bit incomplete. Stick with the drawing past the beginnings and take it a step further. Try to make your lines a little more fluid, as well. You're going back and forth in a scribbly manner and you don't need to.
Lastly, be more conscious of composing your drawing. Some of these get pushed to the margains and feel like you just stopped working on it once you developed it to the border.
Good work.